Thrill of Night ITQ

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Written on January 14, 2024

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Moon and stars, up in blackest skies Breathing softly before night dies Soon, the gentle sun shall arise, Blazing beauty, warmth to chastise. Before the day turned into night, Peaceful sighs blew in winds of light, Serene moon, star’s breathe so polite, Tales of love on hearts she’ll excite. Soft whispers of music stirring, In hearts where hopes are recurring, Amazing that I’m preferring, Lines thwarted and soon they’re blurring. Moonlight falls, flowing on the hills, Perfect love, harmony who thrills.

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/27/2024 10:50:00 AM

Beautifully written, Regina. Congratulations on your top win in my contest. Sorry so late, I've not been feeling well. Love & hugs...Charlie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/27/2024 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Great picture/ending... Have a blessed day...........

Terry Miller

Date: 3/27/2024 9:59:00 AM

A beautiful poem and a great entry in the competition, congratulations.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/14/2024 2:39:00 PM

an exquisite creation, Gina! I loved the almost 'mystical' quality of this poem I especially liked: Soft whispers of music stirring, In hearts where hopes are recurring, Amazing that I’m preferring, Lines thwarted and soon they’re blurring. Your poem re-energized me. thanks for that and enjoy your evening, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/14/2024 3:44:00 AM

Oh my, dear Gina.. This is such a gorgeous poem.. I love the Moon and all the starry elements that adorn those enchanting skies.. They produce a unique form of healing harmony that truly envelops the heart with serene shades of divinity.. "Peaceful sighs blew in winds of light,Serene moon, star’s breathe so polite", "Soft whispers of music stirring", "Moonlight falls, flowing on the hills" Ahh, absolutely magical, dear poetess, this made my heart float on mystical fairy-spells of hope and faith!