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Threnos Me Me

Me,me my forever sigh-
will insecurity die
in an hedonistic cry ?

Inspired by  Will Shakespeare's Threnos form

 | Year Posted 2010

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2021 5:20:00 AM

Interesting lines penned. Sometimes we can get caught up in self even though we do have to have some self-love, self-fulfillment, pleasure, living, etc. because if we don't we'll never make it. It put me to thinking a sign of a good write. Sara

Brian Strand
Date: 9/29/2021 12:56:00 AM

Yes Sara,an original sin methinks