Sara Kendrick Poet Pantoum

Three-Story Pie

Whipped meringue piled high
Underneath the rest of the pie
Layer upon layer pleases the taker
Mother the best pie maker

Underneath the rest of the pie
Vanilla custard soft and yellow lies
Mother the best pie maker
Now the recipe in memory has died

Vanilla custard soft and yellow lie
Layer upon layer please the taker
Now the recipe in memory has died
Whipped meringue--piled high

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Doris Culverhouse April 8, 2010 at 4:35 PM might get explosive with gas from all the vegetables--the brocoli I ate is blowing me up. LOL

Lynette Chachere March 24, 2010 at 4:46 PM you make your picture poems so easy and wonderful to read. the way you write the story without saying what actually happens to the mother with the best pie. -Always&Forever Lynette

Susan Keogh March 22, 2010 at 7:57 PM This reminded me of my mom's homemade pies. They were the best. I remember the neighbors always complimenting her on her baking ability. Thanks for your kind words on my limerick. Susan

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 18, 2010 at 4:28 AM Reading your poetry today has been a yummy pleasure, Sara. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! (Try swirling lemon pudding with vanilla pudding...maybe that was how she did it...Smiles. Now, I want to try it. But with cool whip!) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 17, 2010 at 10:20 PM Interesting write. I like the form. I should try it sometimes and it all sounds so delicious. Thanks for sharing, Sara, and thanks for your kind comments on mine and on facebook. Best wishes, Caroline.

John Freeman March 17, 2010 at 6:08 PM This form really enhances the the rhymes in the verse Sara. Good job, keep up the good work. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2010 at 1:39 PM this is a very TASTY poem! I really like it. LUv, andrea ps wrong brian. I wrote that limerick years ago for someone else, but I think the one here is a lamb too! LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse March 17, 2010 at 11:10 AM she was the best sweet maker, she put the love in,

Audrey Haick March 17, 2010 at 9:21 AM Oh, darn it! I was going to ask you for the recipe, Sara!! Sounds yummy! Enjoyed reading this. ...Peace, love, Audrey

Brian Strand March 17, 2010 at 8:47 AM Very tasty talk Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Gert W. Knop March 17, 2010 at 8:21 AM Lovely pie's piece, Sara! Your poem is really mouth watering. Apple pies are my favourites. Thank you for your comments...Gert

Jeralynn Clark March 17, 2010 at 6:41 AM Yummy......sweet comfort for the soul! Love Jeralynn

Carolyn Devonshire March 17, 2010 at 5:40 AM Sounds delicious, Sara, and it was nice meeting you on Facebook! Love, carolyn