Three Words, Arent Enough.........

These words in my brain, and feelings in my heart
cannot describe my love for you ,but its a start..........

 I love you , doesnt seem like enough,
whenever thinking of you when we are apart, is so rough.......

 It could be....."I love you , Plus"....
The plus, covers my heart  because it pounds so , when you are near.......
and also my ears, when I pick up the phone 
and its your voice that I hear.........

 The plus, covers my stomach, and the butterflies that I get,
when I look up to see you on the walk,
then open the door to hear you say,
"Im sorry , I didnt call , I just wanted to talk"........

 The plus covers my hands , they get so shaky sometimes,
especially when you put , yours in mine...........

 The plus covers my head, when I snap it around,
because I swore , that I had seen your face in a crowd,
and also my voice, when Im sleeping , and whisper your name outloud......

 The plus covers my knees,
when just the sight of you makes them weak,
and also my mouth, when , after kissing you 
I can't speak..........

 You see, "I love you,plus" covers alot,
even when we're not together......
All I have left to say now is........
"I love you plus, forever".........!!

N.L.F.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/2/2009 12:08:00 PM
so beautiful,,I know just how it feels, for me too
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:03:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Sara
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