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Three Wishes

Three Wishes For I look thru yonder skies as three jewels catch my eyes Three wishes come to prize cascading down celestial highs Within the night I must decide a yearning heart deep inside Wishing well upon the hillside before the dreams do collide The universe I wish to keep being close in a quantum leap Creating stars in just a sweep lifting veils of vastness deep For my heart I wish to heal so my long lost love will reveal No more sorrows to conceal thus vanquishing all that I feel Heavens align just once more keeping me in their drawer Dictating love from the core with angels & music as décor A billion galaxies within my view as my love begins to spew Now I start a life anew my last wish I have saved for you. Oct.16.2018 Three Wishes Sponsored by: Kevin Shaw N/A for contest

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Date: 10/20/2018 3:18:00 PM
A heart of a poet dripping with impressive talent , generous love and the epitome of beauty as leaving your "last wish I have saved for you"! Immensely enjoyed the rereads.. a brilliant work that touches the heart! To my FAV. list . Keep shining in Beauty.. blessed be always.
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Date: 10/17/2018 3:18:00 PM
Wolf......this is get out of here Good!!
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Date: 10/17/2018 11:59:00 AM
Perfectly placed wishes! Awe, your heart longs for everything to be wonderful, while leaving that last wish to someone special. How sweet and romantic. :) Cute graphic. It made me smile. Love and Wishes my Warrior with Wings. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM
What an actor, that Homer Simpson, great write my friend...
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:17:00 PM
A terrific job of end AND internal rhyme. How gallant of you to save the last wish for a loved one.
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:07:00 PM
I loved this, the flow and the content, from start to finish you presented a beautiful and captivating poem. Very, very nice. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 10/16/2018 2:45:00 PM
Absolutely amazing my friend. This has it all and should do very well in the contest.
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