Three Stages of a Fire

I  

A spark is shot
Deftly, from between two fingers.
It sits, wavering on its bed
Like a lone star
Against the black,
Cold coals.
Chuckling, a candle flame shows
Its little golden head.
Sleepily, it reaches for its mother
And she, flickering, crackles her tongue
As the scorching hand upon her breast grows
And spreads.
Curious and hungry,
flamma explorat.

II  

A fire is mature, suddenly
Superior. Its arms extend,
It works, briskly it burns.
Like a tiger
It inhabits its cage.
Laughing, a blaze rises
To greet a brittle friend.
For another 
And another
Blaze yearns.
Alas! Any tears would hiss
If the glowing cheeks reminisced a kiss.
It is Love The Fuel on which its life depends.
Selfish and beautiful,
flamma vivat!

III  

The embers sift, tenderly
Nursing the staggering
Foolish old flame
Who must be coaxed to nibble and feed.
No light livens the hearth, haunted now,
Merely shadows.
In faded fame, amidst dusty fortune
The patient lies.
And it ponders as all its dazzle dies
Who taught me to hate?
Was it lack of love or lack of life
That finally dampened my fanciful play?
Slowly,
Painfully,
The gargoyle face is smothered in ash,
The soft powder of its parents fate.
And death waits
Eerily
Still
Until another is born in the grate.
Tired and lonely,
flamma extinguet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 12, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 9:52 PM
Frances, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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February 17, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations Frances on your poem being featured this week. God Bless. Vince
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February 16, 2009 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week, Beautifully done, God Bless*Tyesha
Mason Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Brillant writing here, Frances ... almost reads like a horror story considering whats happening in Australia ... profound selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:59 PM
Frances, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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February 16, 2009 at 5:46 AM
There are so many lines I like in this one....a great idea, imaged with wide imagination. The transformation is perfectly laid out. Congrats on this pick. Love, daver
Jordan Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Francis I remember this poem - Congrats on having it featured this week - amazing writing - God Bless, MJ
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February 1, 2009 at 4:03 AM
Beautifully penned Francis! A magnificent personification. So fortunate are we to have to have you on the Soup.:) Welcome, and blessing to you! Mikki
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January 27, 2009 at 1:37 AM
The Latin phrases concluding each verse lend a strong foundation to this remarkable piece. Richly descriptive and brilliantly written! BRAVO Frances!! Best wishes, Keith
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December 28, 2008 at 9:44 AM
Frances - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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December 28, 2008 at 1:53 AM
great poetry keep them coming best wishes for the new year
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December 27, 2008 at 6:30 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Much to think about here. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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December 26, 2008 at 4:23 PM
Woderful, wonderful playfull questioning. Want to try the new chat feature? Debbie Guzzi
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December 24, 2008 at 12:41 PM
Frances this poem is amazing - Welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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