Get Your Premium Membership

Three Stages of a Fire

I A spark is shot Deftly, from between two fingers. It sits, wavering on its bed Like a lone star Against the black, Cold coals. Chuckling, a candle flame shows Its little golden head. Sleepily, it reaches for its mother And she, flickering, crackles her tongue As the scorching hand upon her breast grows And spreads. Curious and hungry, flamma explorat. II A fire is mature, suddenly Superior. Its arms extend, It works, briskly it burns. Like a tiger It inhabits its cage. Laughing, a blaze rises To greet a brittle friend. For another And another Blaze yearns. Alas! Any tears would hiss If the glowing cheeks reminisced a kiss. It is Love The Fuel on which its life depends. Selfish and beautiful, flamma vivat! III The embers sift, tenderly Nursing the staggering Foolish old flame Who must be coaxed to nibble and feed. No light livens the hearth, haunted now, Merely shadows. In faded fame, amidst dusty fortune The patient lies. And it ponders as all its dazzle dies Who taught me to hate? Was it lack of love or lack of life That finally dampened my fanciful play? Slowly, Painfully, The gargoyle face is smothered in ash, The soft powder of its parents fate. And death waits Eerily Still Until another is born in the grate. Tired and lonely, flamma extinguet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/12/2009 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2009 9:52:00 PM
Frances, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2009 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Frances on your poem being featured this week. God Bless. Vince
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2009 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week, Beautifully done, God Bless*Tyesha
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2009 3:03:00 PM
Brillant writing here, Frances ... almost reads like a horror story considering whats happening in Australia ... profound selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2009 12:59:00 PM
Frances, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2009 5:46:00 AM
There are so many lines I like in this one....a great idea, imaged with wide imagination. The transformation is perfectly laid out. Congrats on this pick. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2009 4:42:00 AM
Francis I remember this poem - Congrats on having it featured this week - amazing writing - God Bless, MJ
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2009 4:03:00 AM
Beautifully penned Francis! A magnificent personification. So fortunate are we to have to have you on the Soup.:) Welcome, and blessing to you! Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2009 1:37:00 AM
The Latin phrases concluding each verse lend a strong foundation to this remarkable piece. Richly descriptive and brilliantly written! BRAVO Frances!! Best wishes, Keith
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2008 9:44:00 AM
Frances - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2008 1:53:00 AM
great poetry keep them coming best wishes for the new year
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2008 6:30:00 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Much to think about here. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2008 4:23:00 PM
Woderful, wonderful playfull questioning. Want to try the new chat feature? Debbie Guzzi
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2008 12:41:00 PM
Frances this poem is amazing - Welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs