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Three Sides To Every Story

The guy went crackers in the war
Now he sells daffodils down  the old grave road
Sings songs about the dead
His daily bread
The kids throw stones
Shout out names
It’s a shame
Who can you blame
One day, the kids were playing in the river
Tommy got into trouble, panic ensued
They ran to him in tears
He ran back with them, diving straight in
Tommy felt the strong arms lift him above the water
His friends pulled him onto the grass
I’ll go back for the rest, he shouted
It was only Tommy
No, there’s always more
He swam out till lost from view
They talked about him for a while
The usual words always came back
He went crackers in the war.

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Date: 12/17/2024 7:08:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful yet sad write again. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Merry Christmas.........
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Date: 12/16/2024 11:42:00 AM
Very clever idea for the contest.. Thank you for writing for my last contest on the soup and congratulations on your placement..
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/17/2024 4:44:00 AM
Great contest, enjoyed entering.
Date: 11/28/2024 11:03:00 PM
Dear paul what a deep and soul stirring write, is this for silent ones contest? You did a unique take on this prompt and delivered one that would leave readers feeling the depth of what youv conveyed. Who are we to blame sometimes when the truth is more than just what can be seen, theres more to every story, altho it can be told from how others perceive. Brilliant take. Pleasure reading this . Sending you light always
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/1/2024 3:00:00 AM
It's a tough one, but that's the reality out there for our heroes.
Date: 11/28/2024 7:03:00 AM
A wonderful yet sad write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/1/2024 3:01:00 AM
Thanks, Paula.

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