Roy Pett Poet Rhyme

Three Seasons

Oh joy of vibrant spring debut 
primroses hue
Daffodils glow
Bluebells floor show

Summer shows her glorious blooms
Roses perfumes 
Tulips kisses
Sweet pea blisses 

Rustic views of autumns delight
Begonia bright
Cornus flaming
Fuchsia charming.


Minute poetry.
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17/03/2017.

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James Inman March 30, 2017 at 11:36 AM You've produced wonderful images in your write Roy. Roy Pett March 30, 2017 at 2:59 PM Thank you very much James for your very kind comment much appreciated, Roy. :))

Elizabeth Kinch March 18, 2017 at 10:41 AM Such fabulous imagery for each season beautifully encapsulated within four lines. Another 7 for you dear Roy. Roy Pett March 18, 2017 at 10:58 AM Thank you very much Elizabeth you are too generous, though much appreciated, I was a little dubious as this doesn't flow very well, thanks again, Roy. :)

Cheryl Hoffman March 18, 2017 at 8:56 AM Lovely depiction of the three seasons Roy! Congrats to you! Enjoyed~Che :) Roy Pett March 18, 2017 at 10:17 AM Thank you very much Cheryl for your very kind comment and support much appreciated, Roy. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 17, 2017 at 2:34 PM These are lovely colours. I enjoyed your poem. Roy Pett March 17, 2017 at 3:57 PM Thank you very much Darlene for your very kind comment, I think a little more practice at this form needed, thanks again Roy. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2017 at 1:15 PM - A beautiful picture of three colorful seasons, Roy (7) - Minute poetry, never heard of it before ... but interesting :) - Lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett March 17, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thank you very much Anne-Lise, this is the first time that I have attempted this form, the syllable constraint makes it difficult to get the poem to flow, more practice required I'm thinking, wishing you a happy weekend, Roy. :)