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Three Poems

Freedom Usurped! Homeward Bound, northbound; A red car with four doors, the red horse of the apocalypse; suddenly, suffocated, gasping air thick with fumes; Soon, freedom through death! Struggling for a breath, unbearable pain in chest; Open the window! Freedom Usurped! Police pursuit, stop the car! I just can't walk the line! Cited! for driving while DEAD!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/8/2017 11:38:00 AM

Such an interesting write! Love the imagery! Will save! Applauding, Victoria!

Darren White

Date: 5/8/2017 6:58:00 AM

I have read several of your poems now, including the first two with the intriguing content "May.7.pdf" :) That aside, you have a very speedy and powerful way of expressing yourself Welcome to PoetrySoup. PS the UNSUPPORTED CODE you can solve by using code PoetrySoup recognizes. You can find the code you can use right above the frame where you can enter your poem.