Three Neanderthals

I heard three Neanderthals in Albuquerque This neighborhood's unhealthy for us We need a Time Machine.

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Emile Pinet

Date: 3/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

Your words enter my mind, resonate there and force me to feel their weight. Well done. Emile. #7

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2015 1:45:00 PM

Dear Rajat, your poem made me laugh. I can just picture the neanderthals wishing to get away from modern civilization. I'd like to take that time machine ride with them and go back to an era when men had not had the chance to despoil our environment. Sending big hugs to you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/4/2015 12:25:00 PM

Excellent pen Rajat! I really enjoyed your very nice piece, you're very clever and funny my dear friend. Yes, sadly, these kind of people are found everywhere, and yes, we need a time machine to send them all back. lol.. A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D."

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2015 3:03:00 PM

They are everywhere....I'm afraid !! Everywhere we look, there is someone who hasn't learned to be civilized !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2015 2:15:00 PM

Ha! I was thinking maybe the three amigos or the three stooges! why are they in Albuquerque?

Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2015 1:16:00 PM

Rajat, oh I know about those kinds of neighbourhoods, we have them here in my city also, very unsafe and thanks so much for visiting my poetry . . .