Shane Cooper Poet Footle

Three Little Piggy's

Three pigs
New digs 

Straw house
Stick house

Wolf Bad 
Big cad

Huff puff
Puff huff

Chinny
Chin chin

Fell in
Big din

Pigs run
Outdone

Wolf quick
Pigs thick

Fresh pork 
On fork
……………………………………………………

Last pig
House big

In digs 
Safe pigs

Huff puff
Puff huff

On fork
No pork

Wolf trick
Pig thick

Turnip meal
Real deal

No way
Pig say

Not thick
Wolf trick

On roof 
Climb wolf

Long shot
Hot pot

Fell in
No grin

Big plate
Pig ate
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And lived happily ever afterwards

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:56 PM LOVE THIS ONE SHANE..SKAT Shane Cooper February 1, 2015 at 3:08 PM Hi, Thanks for taking the time to read more of my work i do appreciate it, i shall come over and visit you page later today. I spoke to Michelle Mac Donald about her poem Fiddlers Cat and she sugested I try something along the same sort of theme. Three little piggies was the resut. love Shane xxx

Lindsay Laurie January 29, 2015 at 6:06 PM G'day Shayne... Certainly something different and very witty Shayne. I certainly enjoyed your humour... and congratulations. Regards - Lindsay Shane Cooper January 29, 2015 at 6:24 PM Thanks Lindsay, i don't have your flare for for humorous story telling, i am still laughing about the baby in the pool, nor Jan Allisons quick sense of humor. But occasionaly something just rises to the surface. I was thinking about an early walt disney cartoon on the three little pigs as i wrote it that must have lightened my mood. Thanks for stopping in Shane xxx

Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 2:06 PM Dropping back with my congrats Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx Shane Cooper January 29, 2015 at 2:17 PM Thanks Jan, It is nice to have you back. love Shane xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 29, 2015 at 11:40 AM Very very entertaining tootle Shane, Congrats on win. God bless.> rajat Shane Cooper January 29, 2015 at 12:09 PM Thanks Rajat. Have a great day. Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:29 AM - Well done footle, Shane ! - fun to read :)) - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :) Shane Cooper January 24, 2015 at 8:18 AM And to you too Anne Lise. Thank you for stopping in I am glad you liked the poem. Love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper January 16, 2015 at 4:19 PM Hi Mikki, i am glad you liked it. ever since reading the fiddlers cat i cannot help but see so many nursary/fairy tails that as you said need a brush up. i think short forms of poetry suit them, sort of like a Looney Tunes cartoon. Love Shane xxx

Michelle Mac Donald January 16, 2015 at 9:00 AM Was one fortunate piggie, Shane.:) Pot luck with perhaps a fur coat? Very clever write, Shane! I've never tried the footle form; I believe you've aced it! Thank you for this morning's smile. Stay well, keep writing...Mikki

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2015 at 2:09 PM hey what a way to footle a fairy tale, good rhymes for this story! Shane Cooper January 15, 2015 at 2:14 PM Thanks Andrea, I had real fun doing this, I have a hankering to attack the three billy goats gruff or goldie locks next. the footle form i think really suits fairy tale type stuff. love Shan xxx

Jan Allison January 14, 2015 at 2:42 AM great string of footles to create a story Shane:-) made me smile:-) hugs jan xx Shane Cooper January 14, 2015 at 2:46 AM thanks Jan. that is the aim of the game. worth more that a million dollars. love Shane xxx