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Three Little Keys To An Unopened Diary

Three small keys in my care In an attic furniture , toys, puzzles, stuffed animals a treasure hunt to find where the keys fit Victorian doll house door perfect fit On a toy bed laid a lace handkerchief In an open trunk laid a wooden box small keyhole opening , a diary lies nestled in its embrace treasured time A lace handkerchief for the tears shed when reading the life pages of one’s soul. 7/7/2016
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Van Der Merwe Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Great write Eve - all the best with the contest. Mark
Ball Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Absolutely beautiful. I had the image of one sitting in an attic going over old things left behind by one's parents. Wonderful. A seven from me. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Think I need a tissue after reading this Eve - thanks for introducing me to a new form, you have mastered it so well:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:33 AM
You are conquering this form. This is intriguing and somehow, to me, a feminine write, if that makes sense. I say that because it awoke all my little girl intrigue until the last lines brought me back to reality. A joy to read, Eve ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:52 PM
the final sentence really summed it up so well, Eve. Very clever. You can do two contests with this maybe? I need to study this form again!!
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:21 PM
I like your take on the theme, Eve, as you unwind the mystery of the three keys. Very nostalgic Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 1:11 PM
enjoyed your write Eve, thank you for sharing, **LUV SKAT**
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:51 AM
- A lace handkerchief sounds too great to wipe tears on, Eve .... I'll fold it nice and put it into the diary - a beautiful poem, a 7- Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Nicely written... Good luck in the contest...
Y. Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Hi Eve, You have penned a well written nostalgic write.It's a good entry for the contest. Good luck in the contest. 7:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:31 AM
This is beautiful Eve. A mystery to find what the keys will open. 7 ; )
Daniel Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Nice little poem, Eve:)
Vaso Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 9:49 PM
So beautiful Eve, I may need a tissue now too! Hugs!
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