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Three Legged Table

10-31-23 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Three Legged Table Above the polished face of the petite gueridon A crystal chandelier sparkles in dreamy hues As one candlestick flickers in perfume, One red rose dreams of minuets, Upheld by gilded caryatides of innocence, Draped maidens and daughters of Athens, In salons where graceful reveries Twirl in graceful circles Around the teapoy’s edge. Unmasked rhapsodies Shimmer with the indelible mystery Of one fleeting ambrosia midnight, Glowing in an amber flush of reflection With bittersweet rondos, Immanent in lacy silhouettes Of dulcet invitation, To swell in crescendos of shadows, Dancing butterflies mirrored in the table’s face.

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Date: 12/4/2023 9:02:00 AM
This just a wonderful poem Sam so many wonderful lines.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/8/2023 12:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Terry. What a fun experience learning about different kinds of three legged tables, their history. I kept seeing a "teapoy" in an elegant, candlelit salon. So glad you enjoyed this poem. It was fun to create. Blessings to you! Cheers!
Date: 11/10/2023 4:47:00 AM
"Unmasked rhapsodies Shimmer with the indelible mystery Of one fleeting ambrosia midnight" - Highly poetic. The entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/10/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hi Chris, what a delight to find your beautiful feedback and congratulations this morning! Thank you! It was a delightful journey discovering the beauty of this antique "teapoy!" Sending you my gratitude and blessings!
Date: 11/9/2023 7:57:00 PM
Sublime piece, Sam. You always dazzle with your stellar imagery and vocabulary. I loved this one. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/10/2023 11:15:00 AM
Greetings and salutations, Edward!!! Thank you not only for this contest and my placement but for the wonderful journey this theme took me on as I researched antique three legged tables imagining them in their settings! Sending you my gratitude and blessings!
Date: 11/8/2023 10:11:00 AM
What a beautifully written and very descriptive read Sam. So many wonderful lines here to enjoy. Love all the delightful imagery - so captivating. ‘ Glowing in an amber flush of reflection’ ‘ Dancing butterflies mirrored in the table’s face. Wonderful and so imaginative. Loved it! Thank you for sharing :):)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/9/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Christina! Your feedback is so lovely. I am deeply touched by your gracious words and compliments. So happy you loved it. I had such fun learning about this antique table and fun imagining the setting. Thank you again for your visit and beautiful feedback! Gratitude and blessings to you!!
Date: 11/7/2023 1:40:00 PM
Delightful poem Sam…..love the last line! Beautiful…Debx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/8/2023 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb! While I had fun creating the scene and writing the poem, I think I had even more fun researching antique three legged tables! All in all, it was delightful experience. Thank yo for sharing in that delight! Blessings!
Date: 11/6/2023 11:23:00 AM
The words you have used are so amazing! the way you have managed to pull such words together, is a tribute to your mastery of english vocabulary! I am sure, this is a top winner! all the best in the contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/8/2023 10:25:00 AM
Krish, thank you so much! Your feedback really brightened my day and blessed my efforts at exploring this unusual theme! I do love words and what they can convey, the scenes they write. We, as poets and writers, are so blessed to have them as BFF's! I do hope Edward likes this one. Thank you for your positive wishes for this poem! Sending you my gratitude and blessings of autumn joy! So wonderful to have you back in the soup!!
Date: 11/2/2023 10:36:00 PM
Hi Sam! This profound &complete description, while of a Thing had SOmuch motion! What a feat of writing !! Truly enjoyed, tho i admit with my limited vocabulary, i had to use my dictionary X2. Super glad i came by ti resd this. Wondering cause this is so perceptive, are U also a visual artist? sally
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/8/2023 8:46:00 AM
Hi Sally! So wonderful to hear from you! Thank you for your visit and your beautiful, heartfelt feedback. I am truly humbled. I have to admit I, too, spent some time with my nose in the dictionary while researching antique "teapoys." Amazing pieces of furniture. And, yes, you guessed it. I am a visual artist who loves to draw and paint when I have time. You are very perceptive and I also write from pictures and scenes that flow through my mind. Hope you are doing well! Sending you blessings of autumn joy!
Date: 11/1/2023 3:37:00 PM
a brilliant take on the prompt for the contest. Your imagery was stunning, captivating, and soft. Your poem flowed seamlessly. I loved many of the lines but this one stood out: One red rose dreams of minuets, Your descriptions were beautiful. I'll be faving this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2023 10:41:00 AM
Hi Sara, sending you bunches of gratitude for you wonderful, and very positive, feedback! So honored by your fav. Thank you! After learning about antique three legged tables this scene kept floating back into my pen - lovers, dancing in candlelight to the scent of a rose in this elegant room, around this lovely table and the memories held in the room! So glad you enjoyed this slice of romance! Blessings!
Date: 10/31/2023 11:23:00 PM
Very descriptive write this is! I love your wordplay as always and how it flows in such a poetic manner! So captivating! And left me in awe! Especially “ crystal chandelier sparkles in dreamy hues“ how dreamy and stunning! “ Glowing in an amber flush of reflection” gorgeous! “ Dancing butterflies mirrored in the table’s face. “ love that! Soulfully divine and artistic diction throughout! You always have a way with getting readers to dream away with your thoughts expressed! Goodluck in the contest
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/1/2023 11:06:00 AM
Dearest Inky, once again you have lifted my spirits like a joy filled butterfly dancing through the garden! I thought this theme was going to be more than difficult!! But, once I did some research on antique three legged tables, this scene of two lovers dancing around the table in candlelight to the scent of a rose emerged. I feel so blessed to have experienced this dreamy loveliness then to share it. So happy you got to revel in a magic midnight! I so appreciate your gracious feedback! We, who write, are truly blessed to have words as BFFs. Sending you blessings of joy!
Date: 10/31/2023 5:04:00 PM
A wonderful poetic visual portrayal of the antique teapoy Sam, I enjoyed the read very much. Blessings, Belle
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/1/2023 10:57:00 AM
Greetings Belle! Thank you so much! It was a delightful experience to learn about an antique "teapoy" then imagine a room where it could be found bathed in candlelight and the pervasive scent of a rose. I could see lovers dancing around the table like butterflies. What looked like an impossible theme turned into a joyful celebration of romance and love for me. Thank you for sharing in this scene. Blessings!
Date: 10/31/2023 2:21:00 PM
A lovely write with a great ending. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day...................
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/31/2023 3:50:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much! Blessings!
Date: 10/31/2023 1:09:00 PM
- An excellent poem, Sam ...gilded caryatides ... gilded caryatides ... swell in crescendos of shadows ... woow ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/31/2023 3:52:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I loved learning about antique three legged tables. It was fun to create a poem around this image! Blessings and hugs!
Date: 10/31/2023 12:22:00 PM
Very beautiful. It seemed like it was reflecting the area around it and trying to speak. Enjoyed!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/31/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige! It was an interesting theme but I had fun researching antique three legged tables and the rooms they grace and continue to grace with their presence! Blessings to you for All Hallows Eve!

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