Three Keys

Three chambers of my heart allocated to my husband my son my parents, brothers and sisters My chest feels heavy at times the walls continuously expanding and housing deepest and darkest secrets brief confessions celestial ambitions inane fantasies fathomless consternation wrapping all in impenetrable film securing them under lock and key with no possibility of compromise The tiny keys I guard with life Isn't trust what family is all about? Written on 07/05/2016
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Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:45 PM
ood one sara.. big congrats!..huggs
Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Congrats Sara, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 3:01 PM
A very good poem I like this version x
Selfa Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Great write Sara! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Hey,thanks a lot for reading and your kind comments Hansteven!
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:50 PM
beautifully penned sara congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Thanks a lot Jan.I think of the footbridge every time I see you name:)
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Sara, I love the direction you took this poem. You hold the keys to an amazing vault of life. Congratulations on your win in the 'three keys contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Sandra, I loved your keys of faith,hope an love!Very deep and meaningful,congrats to you too!
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Ah, loves epoxy, the trust the binds truth to love. thanks for participating in the contest Sara.
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Thanks for picking my poem,John!
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Sara, wonderful write good luck in the contest.
Chansarkar Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Thanks a lot Eve!
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