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Three Keys

Three chambers of my heart allocated to my husband my son my parents, brothers and sisters My chest feels heavy at times the walls continuously expanding and housing deepest and darkest secrets brief confessions celestial ambitions inane fantasies fathomless consternation wrapping all in impenetrable film securing them under lock and key with no possibility of compromise The tiny keys I guard with life Isn't trust what family is all about? Written on 07/05/2016

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Date: 7/23/2016 4:45:00 PM
ood one sara.. big congrats!..huggs
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:08:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:01:00 PM
A very good poem I like this version x
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great write Sara! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 12:08:00 PM
Hey,thanks a lot for reading and your kind comments Hansteven!
Date: 7/20/2016 6:50:00 PM
beautifully penned sara congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot Jan.I think of the footbridge every time I see you name:)
Date: 7/20/2016 5:53:00 PM
Sara, I love the direction you took this poem. You hold the keys to an amazing vault of life. Congratulations on your win in the 'three keys contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I loved your keys of faith,hope an love!Very deep and meaningful,congrats to you too!
Date: 7/20/2016 2:06:00 PM
Ah, loves epoxy, the trust the binds truth to love. thanks for participating in the contest Sara.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/21/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks for picking my poem,John!
Date: 7/5/2016 9:31:00 PM
Sara, wonderful write good luck in the contest.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/7/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks a lot Eve!

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