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Three High Haiku's

The dream to fly high
Scattered puffy clouds below
A goose honks to pass

He cliff dived a lot
No water, the jump was hot
The landing was not

First skydiver fall
Lunch packed, no chute, dropped the ball
That's not good at all!

Copyright © Pat Adams | Year Posted 2018

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Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/13/2018 8:42:00 PM Yikes! RIP to the impulsive cliff diver! A dark comedy this one is Pat!~Che :) Login to Reply Pat Adams Date: 3/14/2018 1:06:00 AM I know right? I'm not sure if he ate the lunch as a last meal or not! I think I'm going to say he fell in water and survived!! YaY!!..........pat

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/12/2018 7:46:00 PM A funny one! My husband did a very high dive. Thank the Lord there was water! Login to Reply Pat Adams Date: 3/14/2018 1:04:00 AM I did a 120 ft. bungee jumped tied to my ankles. They were suppose to take a picture and forgot. They said I could do it again free so they could take the picture. I said, "NO WAY!".......very scary..........80)

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/12/2018 4:27:00 PM ha! very clever haikus, pat... Login to Reply Pat Adams Date: 3/14/2018 1:03:00 AM Thank you so much Ilene. I look up to you as an obviously advanced poet. Much thanks!......p

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/12/2018 2:25:00 PM The title caught my eye, brilliantly done Pat. Login to Reply Pat Adams Date: 3/14/2018 1:02:00 AM An amazing comment coming from an obvious Haiku master!......Thank you so much Tom.......pat

Line Gauthier Date: 3/12/2018 1:46:00 PM Pat, most impressive are your high I.Q.'s. Loved reading these funny haikus. Login to Reply Pat Adams Date: 3/14/2018 1:01:00 AM You are really too sweet. (But I'll take it!!!) ...80)