Pat Adams Poet Haiku

Three High Haiku's

The dream to fly high
Scattered puffy clouds below
A goose honks to pass

He cliff dived a lot
No water, the jump was hot
The landing was not

First skydiver fall
Lunch packed, no chute, dropped the ball
That's not good at all!

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Cheryl Hoffman March 13, 2018 at 8:42 PM Yikes! RIP to the impulsive cliff diver! A dark comedy this one is Pat!~Che :) Pat Adams March 14, 2018 at 1:06 AM I know right? I'm not sure if he ate the lunch as a last meal or not! I think I'm going to say he fell in water and survived!! YaY!!..........pat

Kim Rodrigues March 12, 2018 at 7:46 PM A funny one! My husband did a very high dive. Thank the Lord there was water! Pat Adams March 14, 2018 at 1:04 AM I did a 120 ft. bungee jumped tied to my ankles. They were suppose to take a picture and forgot. They said I could do it again free so they could take the picture. I said, "NO WAY!".......very scary..........80)

Ilene Bauer March 12, 2018 at 4:27 PM ha! very clever haikus, pat... Pat Adams March 14, 2018 at 1:03 AM Thank you so much Ilene. I look up to you as an obviously advanced poet. Much thanks!......p

Tom Cunningham March 12, 2018 at 2:25 PM The title caught my eye, brilliantly done Pat. Pat Adams March 14, 2018 at 1:02 AM An amazing comment coming from an obvious Haiku master!......Thank you so much Tom.......pat

Line Gauthier March 12, 2018 at 1:46 PM Pat, most impressive are your high I.Q.'s. Loved reading these funny haikus. Pat Adams March 14, 2018 at 1:01 AM You are really too sweet. (But I'll take it!!!) ...80)