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8/4/2025 for The seed of Fear Poetry Contest sponsored by Jami Patterson 

One, two, I think I'm through; Three, four, under the floor; Five, six, I'm in a fix; Seven, eight, he met his fate; Nine, ten, I'm in the pen; Eleven, twelve, my hopes to shelve; Thirteen, fourteen, clean with chlorine; Fifteen, sixteen, bloody crime scene; Seventeen, eighteen, murder unforeseen; Nineteen, twenty, stole my Good & Plenty.

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Date: 8/4/2025 9:37:00 PM
Hmm like a school yard song . Reminded me of one two buckle my shoe. Good idea
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Date: 8/5/2025 1:05:00 PM
thanks Andre! Yup, it's a take-off of one-two, buckle my shoe - for the contest.

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