Three Forty Five Connection

Three Forty Five Connection


Wednesday afternoon? I don’t remember
Technology---helper drives me crazy
Not a magic mirror you brought me
Yesterday afternoon? I don’t remember 
Seeing each other, both were smiling

“Does he feel what I feel?”
“I guess he feels”
Or he..., “does she feel what I feel?”
“I guess she feels”
He brought funny staffs 
And I brought big smile

Both were disturbed by two different eyes
God made him it green
And mine is black

I did stare and show thousand glitters in my eyes
For him to say, “that is my response for your gentle smile”
He did cute gestures far from distance,
The puppet show for me to smile.

“Do I need to laugh? Yes I smiled!”
He is the only one who made like that.

Couldn’t distinguish how far our gap
Because He molded him as doll
A doll that he made
Oh! Yes! 
They were four!

Lucy and Johny, Sussy and Cassandra

The heart shape lips formed into a kiss
Transparent wall met from thousand miles
Color and culture, height and weight
Status and condition are not important
Who cares?
Distance is not significant?!

Crazy afternoon, 3:45, 5:45 time to say goodbye
Silent morning, 12:45 called him to rest

Both heart rebelled to turn off the...
Both were decided to give each number and...
So... Who first to utter? And he then...

“When do we see each other again?”

Hands’ clock killed the moment
Unstable condition...
What ah! Oh why?
Connection trapped by the world wide web problem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 8:13 AM
You have a unique style! This captivated my mind.
Mohammed Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Beautifully crafted enjoyed the read Elai.
Mohammed Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:33 PM
I'm not well Elai Cee.
Cee Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 9:36 AM
thanks Mustapha how r u
Comporozos Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 2:51 AM
mysteriously attractively, strangely woven like our too many interrupted moments in our lives which appear again, all of a sudden, at some other time
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 3:02 PM
whimsical, beautiful piece, elai.. sounds liken interrupted date!.. a glad you're back!.. greaat job!.
Cee Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 6:49 AM
I wish I could right again... after the busy days...
Peranteau Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Elai dear poet; I find myself in this time zone quite often ! I am an avid train rider to the city and....oh the beauty ! *smiles* You may have had some of another conception, yet your beautiful write brought back some fantastic desires ! Have a blessed New year dear poet, for you and yours ! Much love, james
Cee Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 6:48 AM
:) Yeah James... Thanks for sharing your experience too... It's really hard to find someone especially if he/she is far from you. hihi
Onclaud Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 2:59 PM
true hearts connect no matter the difference between time zones.. so lovely, elai... happy new year.. huggs
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December 25, 2013 at 1:26 PM
Elai, hope you are having a wonderful Christmas week.... By the way this is very deep. I once had this problem, glad time was on my side,... All was possible. We met in person, and it's been all suave since... xox..Linda
Cee Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 12:58 PM
This poem is for the person that I met, "Eduard." Hoping we will meet personally :) Thanks for the comments.
Goff Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Original work to Elai! I like it! jimbo
Cee Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:22 AM
thanks James. Can't write now a poem 'coz of many works. Hope to write again with a calm time.
Makama Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Splendid and adequate for a sound mind. This gave me more light to my soul and has stimulated a self- expression from me, serving as the fuel to my outburst.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Fast paced, vivid, abrupt but fluid, a great depiction of the world we currently live in -Good Job! MC
Cee Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:55 AM
yes. thanks for the visit Marquis
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 11:32 PM
heady piece with wonderfully tangled imagery, elai.. by the way,my search - http://elaiceezy.blogspot.com/2013/09/save-world-save-brighter-future hml- did not match any documents. .. any thoughts on this?..:) huggs
Ellison Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:52 PM
There is certainly a disruption in our world wide ideologies!
Nair Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Elai, I love this connection!!
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