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Three Forty Five Connection

Three Forty Five Connection Wednesday afternoon? I don’t remember Technology---helper drives me crazy Not a magic mirror you brought me Yesterday afternoon? I don’t remember Seeing each other, both were smiling “Does he feel what I feel?” “I guess he feels” Or he..., “does she feel what I feel?” “I guess she feels” He brought funny staffs And I brought big smile Both were disturbed by two different eyes God made him it green And mine is black I did stare and show thousand glitters in my eyes For him to say, “that is my response for your gentle smile” He did cute gestures far from distance, The puppet show for me to smile. “Do I need to laugh? Yes I smiled!” He is the only one who made like that. Couldn’t distinguish how far our gap Because He molded him as doll A doll that he made Oh! Yes! They were four! Lucy and Johny, Sussy and Cassandra The heart shape lips formed into a kiss Transparent wall met from thousand miles Color and culture, height and weight Status and condition are not important Who cares? Distance is not significant?! Crazy afternoon, 3:45, 5:45 time to say goodbye Silent morning, 12:45 called him to rest Both heart rebelled to turn off the... Both were decided to give each number and... So... Who first to utter? And he then... “When do we see each other again?” Hands’ clock killed the moment Unstable condition... What ah! Oh why? Connection trapped by the world wide web problem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/23/2015 8:13:00 AM
You have a unique style! This captivated my mind.
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:31:00 AM
Beautifully crafted enjoyed the read Elai.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 4/17/2015 6:33:00 PM
I'm not well Elai Cee.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/17/2015 9:36:00 AM
thanks Mustapha how r u
Date: 3/22/2014 2:51:00 AM
mysteriously attractively, strangely woven like our too many interrupted moments in our lives which appear again, all of a sudden, at some other time
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Date: 3/20/2014 3:02:00 PM
whimsical, beautiful piece, elai.. sounds liken interrupted date!.. a glad you're back!.. greaat job!.
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Date: 3/20/2014 6:49:00 AM
I wish I could right again... after the busy days...
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Date: 1/3/2014 8:59:00 PM
Elai dear poet; I find myself in this time zone quite often ! I am an avid train rider to the city and....oh the beauty ! *smiles* You may have had some of another conception, yet your beautiful write brought back some fantastic desires ! Have a blessed New year dear poet, for you and yours ! Much love, james
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Date: 3/20/2014 6:48:00 AM
:) Yeah James... Thanks for sharing your experience too... It's really hard to find someone especially if he/she is far from you. hihi
Date: 12/28/2013 2:59:00 PM
true hearts connect no matter the difference between time zones.. so lovely, elai... happy new year.. huggs
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:26:00 PM
Elai, hope you are having a wonderful Christmas week.... By the way this is very deep. I once had this problem, glad time was on my side,... All was possible. We met in person, and it's been all suave since... xox..Linda
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Date: 12/25/2013 12:58:00 PM
This poem is for the person that I met, "Eduard." Hoping we will meet personally :) Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 11/21/2013 10:22:00 PM
Original work to Elai! I like it! jimbo
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Elai Cee
Date: 12/13/2013 8:22:00 AM
thanks James. Can't write now a poem 'coz of many works. Hope to write again with a calm time.
Date: 11/21/2013 7:42:00 AM
Splendid and adequate for a sound mind. This gave me more light to my soul and has stimulated a self- expression from me, serving as the fuel to my outburst.
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:04:00 PM
Fast paced, vivid, abrupt but fluid, a great depiction of the world we currently live in -Good Job! MC
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:55:00 AM
yes. thanks for the visit Marquis
Date: 9/4/2013 11:32:00 PM
heady piece with wonderfully tangled imagery, elai.. by the way,my search - http://elaiceezy.blogspot.com/2013/09/save-world-save-brighter-future hml- did not match any documents. .. any thoughts on this?..:) huggs
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Date: 9/1/2013 12:52:00 PM
There is certainly a disruption in our world wide ideologies!
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Date: 9/1/2013 9:41:00 AM
Elai, I love this connection!!
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