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Three Forces At Work

Ethereal jade 
  Incandescent virgin brine
      Heaven fuses you.



13th place in the "Champagne Skies" contest.
A. Green

naturehaiku

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Mitch White

March 30, 2010 at 1:45 PM

Yes, awesome Amy Congrats

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Awesome entry Amy. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2010 at 7:30 PM

Fine imagery. congrats for the win

Audrey Haick

March 28, 2010 at 11:36 AM

Hey Amy, Congratulations, my friend!! Wonderful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Marty Owens

March 28, 2010 at 10:36 AM

Very nice Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

March 28, 2010 at 8:34 AM

Amy, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > its another gem for sure, using the word Jade does it for me >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2010 at 7:01 AM

Congrats Amy on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku and win for u to so enjoy as u strut down to the winners circle.. see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Amy. Love Carol

Bathsheba Bathsheba

March 28, 2010 at 4:53 AM

Impressive imagery Amy - Rather captivated me - So little but so much - Thankyou for sharing -:)

Raul Moreno

March 28, 2010 at 1:03 AM

Amy, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Audrey Haick

March 27, 2010 at 2:29 PM

Excellent imagery, Amy...amazing how we all capture so many different images from one painting or picture....Peace, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 27, 2010 at 10:51 AM

Wow eight words yet and you've painted such a visual piece--very nice haiku, enjoyed reading and visualizing this :) thanks as well for all your comments in my poems, Amy :)

Mitch White

March 27, 2010 at 5:45 AM

Great visual capture here

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