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Three Forces At Work

Ethereal jade Incandescent virgin brine Heaven fuses you. 13th place in the "Champagne Skies" contest. A. Green

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Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 1:45:00 PM

Yes, awesome Amy Congrats

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:14:00 AM

Awesome entry Amy. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 7:30:00 PM

Fine imagery. congrats for the win

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:36:00 AM

Hey Amy, Congratulations, my friend!! Wonderful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:36:00 AM

Very nice Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:34:00 AM

Amy, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > its another gem for sure, using the word Jade does it for me >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:01:00 AM

Congrats Amy on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku and win for u to so enjoy as u strut down to the winners circle.. see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Amy. Love Carol

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/28/2010 4:53:00 AM

Impressive imagery Amy - Rather captivated me - So little but so much - Thankyou for sharing -:)

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 1:03:00 AM

Amy, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/27/2010 2:29:00 PM

Excellent imagery, Amy...amazing how we all capture so many different images from one painting or picture....Peace, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/27/2010 10:51:00 AM

Wow eight words yet and you've painted such a visual piece--very nice haiku, enjoyed reading and visualizing this :) thanks as well for all your comments in my poems, Amy :)

Mitch White

Date: 3/27/2010 5:45:00 AM

Great visual capture here