Three Fates

Life's thread is spun, measured, and snipped
By three dainty pairs of deft hands
To weave the cold words of life's fickle script.

Clotho spins life with a valiant grip,
Her spindle ablaze with gold strands.
Life's thread is spun, measured, and snipped.

Lachesis measures without pause or slip,
Deciding the length of life's band
To weave the cold words of life's fickle script.

Atropos carries the scissors that clip
The thread where her sister commands.
Life's thread is spun, measured, and snipped.

Every last soul becomes a conscript,
Drafted to heed their demands
To weave the cold words of life's fickle script.

With each stolid snip, our free will is stripped
As Fate's fluid flames are fanned.
Life's thread is spun, measured, and snipped
To weave the cold words of life's fickle script.

*Based on Greek Mythology's "Moirai"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 6, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Hi Heather, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda
Delaney Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 11:25 AM
WOW my first read of your words and I am duly impressed. Villanelles are not an easy form and you have done it with finesse. Look forward to reading more of your poems.
Zerbst Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Very good villanelle! The words flow effortlessly with a pleasing rhythm. I always have enjoyed reading about the Muses. I see absolutely nothing that could be improved upon. Please accept my humble admiration.
Falotico Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 8:00 AM
A perfect form sprinkled with amazing words... hugs Michael
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 6:34 PM
wow, you did a very impressive job with villanelle, Heather. They are not that easy to do but this is a WOW one. Interesting how you used three different gods to discuss life and fate.(are they gods? or some other mythical creatures?)
A   Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Heather, your poem is impressive. love the way our world fickle up these script... always~ PD
Hunter Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 1:56 PM
I call this perfection...you too good, Heather.
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March 19, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Nice poem, very nice... Terry
Bellville Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 12:06 PM
This is a really good poem. Nice job.
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