Three Dog Nights

Three nights have passed
He was dead to the world
A pirate to some, a scoundrel to others
Whiskey bottles littered the room
On the third day
He rose again from the dead
His pal Johnny Walker by his side
Walking was not in the cards
He fell back into his shroud
Buried
A poor man with a heart of gold
He believed in resurrection
Many a time he proved this himself
One day, in the back of his mind
He hoped
God would take him seriously
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 8:58 PM
witty my friend you have a mind i admire
Vaso Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Thank you, that makes one of us!! :)
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Another great write, which I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing... Luciilla
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Thanks a bunch Lucilla, I see that your avatar is now beautiful flower as are you!!!
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:56 PM
what a beautiful, edgy write.. your words explode with bold images, arthur... have they called you as a finalist fo the nobel prize?...:) .. huggs
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:03 PM
LOL Nette, yes they have in my dreams!!! Thank you for such kind words!!!
Williams Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Hey Arthur love the dryness in this apt tale, thanks for your visit and am starting anew with poems, out with the old.....Hope you had a peaceful time....David
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:04 PM
Hi David, since I was young boy, I hated that things change! why cant the world stay frozen in time? However I will look forward to reading all your new creations!
Torres Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 9:49 AM
hmmmm... sort of intriguing lines.... kinda familiar and well.. this is fun to read.. above all!! .. :O))
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Hello Aiyah , thank you for dropping by and saying such kind words!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:35 AM
funny one but so clever.. :D ==olive here.. :)
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Mr Funny says thank you the writer of beautiful poems!
Hamilton Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:09 AM
I love the sarcastic sense of humour in this Arthur a super pen ty for kind comments on my works hugs ps your Jane is out there keep looking
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Shadow hugs!
Merrill Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 1:28 AM
Yeah, I feel it. very nice. Thanks for the journey Arthur :) Peace, Mel :)
Merrill Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Please do my good man. Nobody else does lol
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Mel, looking forward to reading more of your works!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Very witty and original arthur!
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Thanks Keith
Anglesey Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Wow arthur... an ingenious allegory! I really enjoyed this...going into my faves....Thank you for your most generous comments on my poetry ...
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:13 PM
It is my pleasure and thank you, I often have doubts about some poems, so nice to get a pat on the back, thanks!
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