Three Di-Mentional Firefly In Hcc

A thousand fireflies,
light up the night with torches.
World getting brighter.

Torch
firefly
holds light high
brightens night sky
lit

Phosphorescent light
coming from male abdomen.
Invites passionate glowworms.
Wingless female blinks,
hoping to attract nice male.
Will soon be a thousand more.



Note: Haiku...Cinquain...Choka   voila   HCC
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mchugh Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Excellent imagery in a beautiful form. GM
Loving Iii Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 3:41 PM
don't complicate it with names. when you can just call it poetry. jhl
Guzzi Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 12:50 PM
very creative! Light & Love
Dyer Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 4:32 PM
I love the nature theme fireflies are cool. Thanks for reading my poem home
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 12:09 AM
strong write and truely original that ses alot about your writting great job
Goff Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 5:02 AM
a lot of artistic fun! Marty! really enjoyed the movement the entirety created! and thanks for your kind comments! jim
Chircop Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Bravo--Charma
Richards Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 8:20 AM
This is amazing....what a wonderful combination of poetry!! Love, Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 2:56 AM
Awesome write on so many levels, Marty. Pure genius! Love, Carolyn
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