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Threatened

Half of clam shell sits deserted
Scene's purity threatened by storm
Gravitational force pulls sea

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2015 4:27:00 AM

Wonderful imagery in this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2015 6:29:00 AM

- Thanks, dear Sara, a pleasure to read !!! - Beautiful! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/3/2015 6:26:00 AM

superb visual poetry Sara...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/3/2015 1:51:00 AM

delightful image painted Sara hugs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/2/2015 7:45:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Happy New Year Sarah! Light & Love

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/2/2015 5:30:00 PM

congratulations Sara for Poem Of The Day, wayyyyy to go

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 5:26:00 PM

Hi Sara, I big congratulations to you for your poem being selected POTD! Very brilliant! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 1/2/2015 4:34:00 PM

Sarah, congratulations on poem of the day. I love it. Blessings 7

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/2/2015 3:26:00 PM

Nice to see this as POTD. Congratulations Sara.

Donna Jones

Date: 1/2/2015 1:04:00 PM

Beautiful descriptive write Sarah and much congratulations! Well done..:-) :-) :-) been mostly offline a while..hope all is well and you and yours had wonderful holidays!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 12:18:00 PM

brilliantly descriptive many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/2/2015 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, this little gem being chosen poem of the day.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/2/2015 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations Sara! A brilliant piece of writing!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 5:18:00 AM

Yes I said it,I am so happy this Poem gets it required attention;congrats Sara on the POD...huggs

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/1/2015 10:28:00 AM

Wow! Unbelievable quality here Sara! To mine faves... j y mind is spun a thousand time-stopping directions with this 3 line masterpiece! One for my wall! Wow again! ...soupmail

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/1/2015 7:50:00 AM

Storms are a part of life. This we must accept. Hope your life is calm in the coming year, Sara. Wishing you all the best under His guiding hands. Interesting write...Hugs

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/1/2015 7:50:00 AM

Wonderful! this is simply fantastic. Nette's contest visual 2 is this, please don't forget your name,date and other requirements. No doubt , this is a winner. Goodluck Sara...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/1/2015 5:48:00 AM

I love the sea. The calm as well as the storm. The changing of the tides. I find it all so amazing.

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