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Threads of life and loving Run through your mind weaving many colours Blue of past dreams hidden amongst the golden threads of life before. Rosy hues of loving, Red threads of desiring passion unleashed.. Penned 15 April 2014 by Seren Roberts Contest: Threads of Syllables Form: Aquarian

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Date: 4/24/2014 11:13:00 PM
glad you placed in the top three. It remains one of the best for me.
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:04:00 AM
Very tender colorful threads carefully entwined Seren ! A great poem wid a great win, congrats!
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:39:00 PM
Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, seren
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:53:00 AM
Lovely threaded creativity:) congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:35:00 AM
you weave such fantastic expressions., seren... a well-deserved win in my contest.. cheers and huggs!
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:18:00 AM
Serene, the metaphorical presence of this poem brings a peaceful breeze... Congratulations on winning in Nette's contest.. Verlena
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Date: 4/22/2014 5:19:00 PM
i love the way yours is metaphorical AND colorful. One of my favorites in this contest.
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:33:00 PM
Seren, beautiful....Linda
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:22:00 AM
Thank you .....Seren

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