Seren Roberts Poet Verse

Threads

Threads of
life and loving
Run through your mind weaving
many colours

Blue of
past dreams hidden
amongst the golden threads
of life before.

Rosy
hues of loving,
Red threads of desiring
passion unleashed..



Penned 15 April 2014 by Seren Roberts

Contest:  Threads of Syllables

Form:   Aquarian

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Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2014 at 11:13 PM glad you placed in the top three. It remains one of the best for me.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 4:04 AM Very tender colorful threads carefully entwined Seren ! A great poem wid a great win, congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 23, 2014 at 10:39 PM Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, seren

Paul Callus April 23, 2014 at 11:53 AM Lovely threaded creativity:) congrats on win. // paul

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2014 at 11:35 AM you weave such fantastic expressions., seren... a well-deserved win in my contest.. cheers and huggs!

Verlena S. Walker April 23, 2014 at 10:18 AM Serene, the metaphorical presence of this poem brings a peaceful breeze... Congratulations on winning in Nette's contest.. Verlena

Andrea Dietrich April 22, 2014 at 5:19 PM i love the way yours is metaphorical AND colorful. One of my favorites in this contest.

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2014 at 11:33 PM Seren, beautiful....Linda Seren Roberts April 16, 2014 at 2:22 AM Thank you .....Seren