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Ripped out love. Not nearly enough Threads hanging left, To connect. Too many tears wept. To repair me now, Yank the rest out; No evidence allowed. Pull the straggling ends, Till I’m empty again. 2/3/12 For Paula's "Thread" contest

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Date: 5/11/2012 11:31:00 AM
this has a great concept and better yet great execution. strong start and a stronger finish your best work i have read yet not that i have read many yet lol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:37:00 PM
hmmm, looks like no score? (me neither)
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Date: 2/4/2012 3:04:00 PM
I like how you did your entry, Susan. I always love analogy and you held it to the very end with the theme you created. I hope it scores. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:56:00 PM
What a powerful write Susan! I love how you keep wanting the thread out that has been straggling, that could be of evidence! I also love how you want to leave yourself empty again, to being anew, to start over! Like I said, very powerful poem! I really enjoyed reading it this fine afternoon! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/4/2012 10:54:00 AM
Its interesting that alot of these "thread" poems are sad and full of angst. That said..I enjoyed the read..well done. BG
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Date: 2/4/2012 10:28:00 AM
A very creative and good entry for contest,best wishes Elizabeth
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