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Did you ever wonder how things work in your head
How every thought you ever think is connected by a thread
Sometimes it’s just a little thing then somehow you are led
To something unrelated to something they just said

Let me illustrate - - -

My wife asked about the weather
And I thought, yea, I’m cold
I should get a sweater
Then I thought all mine were old
Then thinking about my closet
I thought about my shoes
Thinking they need polish
What color should I choose
But thinking about colors
I like the color green
Green makes me think of summer
And the places that I’ve seen
Then thinking about vacations
I thought about this cruise
That I took with my sister
Then I thought about the booze
And how much that had cost us
But what a time we had
Then I thought how much I missed her
And how that made me sad
And thinking about sadness
Made me think of winter blahs
So instead of a quick answer
I just sort of pause
And then I said I missed her
My wife just stood there blinking
She said that’s not what I asked you
My Lord, what are you thinking
There was no use my explaining
How I got to what I said
That somehow it’s connected
By one single little thread
So I just said I’m sorry
What were you saying hon
But she had this look of wonder
Her own thoughts had just begun

Mdailey	2/2/12

1st place in contest
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Richards Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:45 PM
So true!!!!! What a clever interpretation of the contest theme....and so well deserved!!
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Paula Swanson's "Thread" contest Mike. Love, Carol
Flach Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 10:00 AM
Great job, Mike. I like the flow of this one - it was fun to read. And, the thought process was unique; funny; wittly and right on theme. Very creative.
Taylor Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Congrats, Mike. Outstanding, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:05 AM
this is so unique, a highway of thought, brilliant to read, and a well deserved winner. harry
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:37 AM
Congratulations Mike, love you mental agility x
Quigley Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 10:34 PM
Oh man Mike, this is so right on. This mental conversation with oneself is played out daily in households nationwide. Really hit home. Wonderful write. Congratulations
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Mike, I really liked the way you interpreted this contest and produced a wonderful write. Congrats on your well deserved win.......................S.Ronthorpe
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 7:39 PM
I love the way you thought up how to do the contest. Unique and wonderful poem!! congrats on top win.
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Thank you for sharing yours poem today Mike,wery good poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 11:53 AM
A very good poem on the theme of the contest.Should be a winner.Enjoyed very much.
Merryman Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Mike. I can certainly relate to how one thought can meander from one subject to another. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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