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Did you ever wonder how things work in your head How every thought you ever think is connected by a thread Sometimes it’s just a little thing then somehow you are led To something unrelated to something they just said Let me illustrate - - - My wife asked about the weather And I thought, yea, I’m cold I should get a sweater Then I thought all mine were old Then thinking about my closet I thought about my shoes Thinking they need polish What color should I choose But thinking about colors I like the color green Green makes me think of summer And the places that I’ve seen Then thinking about vacations I thought about this cruise That I took with my sister Then I thought about the booze And how much that had cost us But what a time we had Then I thought how much I missed her And how that made me sad And thinking about sadness Made me think of winter blahs So instead of a quick answer I just sort of pause And then I said I missed her My wife just stood there blinking She said that’s not what I asked you My Lord, what are you thinking There was no use my explaining How I got to what I said That somehow it’s connected By one single little thread So I just said I’m sorry What were you saying hon But she had this look of wonder Her own thoughts had just begun Mdailey 2/2/12 1st place in contest

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Date: 2/7/2012 1:45:00 PM
So true!!!!! What a clever interpretation of the contest theme....and so well deserved!!
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Paula Swanson's "Thread" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:00:00 AM
Great job, Mike. I like the flow of this one - it was fun to read. And, the thought process was unique; funny; wittly and right on theme. Very creative.
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:25:00 AM
Congrats, Mike. Outstanding, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:05:00 AM
this is so unique, a highway of thought, brilliant to read, and a well deserved winner. harry
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations Mike, love you mental agility x
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:34:00 PM
Oh man Mike, this is so right on. This mental conversation with oneself is played out daily in households nationwide. Really hit home. Wonderful write. Congratulations
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:41:00 PM
Mike, I really liked the way you interpreted this contest and produced a wonderful write. Congrats on your well deserved win.......................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:39:00 PM
I love the way you thought up how to do the contest. Unique and wonderful poem!! congrats on top win.
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Date: 2/2/2012 1:02:00 PM
Thank you for sharing yours poem today Mike,wery good poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/2/2012 11:53:00 AM
A very good poem on the theme of the contest.Should be a winner.Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 2/2/2012 9:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Mike. I can certainly relate to how one thought can meander from one subject to another. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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