Joyce Johnson Poet Rhyme

Thread of An Idea

I have taken your single thread
And rolled it into a neat ball.
I’d like to knit a poem from it
And gift it to you as a shawl.

There are bright colors in this thread
That could be knitted into words. 
But I am ever error prone
And must unravel the absurds.

I see my needle caught the thread, 
Turned adjective into a noun.
English and knitting teachers both
Are looking at me with a frown.

I’ve drawn a pattern just for you
Have even coined some brand new words.
Your knit/poetry will come to you
On bright wings of exotic birds.

A true artist could knit a poem
That would be pleasure for your eyes.
I send my humble gift to you
And please feel free to criticize.

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Kelly Deschler April 23, 2014 at 1:25 AM A very clever and beautiful write, Joyce. I really enjoyed reading your winning poem. Congratulations to you! This should do well in Nette's contest, also. Good luck!

Sam Toil April 22, 2014 at 7:23 AM Hi Joyce. What a beautiful poem you have knitted here. Your needle effortlessly knits each line and each rhyme, interweaving metaphor with intent like an artful dance. There is nothing "humble" about this poem at all. You are "A true artist". BTW, you may want to check out Sara Kendrick's poem, "Threads". She also explores the allegory of weaving. Thanks so much for sharing your poem. Peace...Sam

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 22, 2014 at 5:15 AM Very well knit ideas indeed ! great poem with a wonderful win Joyce,,, congrats !

Sam Raj April 22, 2014 at 2:16 AM Missed the congrats on your win. Thanks

Sam Raj April 22, 2014 at 2:15 AM A wonderfully woven warmth of a poem. Enjoyed it immensely, just the type I would like to pen. If you can turn adjective into noun. Boy that a gift, well thought of words spun into a warm garment. Thanks for sharing

Dr.Ram Mehta April 22, 2014 at 1:53 AM Brilliant write and congrats on the win, joyce

Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2014 at 9:53 PM HI JOYCE, Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda

Tim Smith April 21, 2014 at 9:33 PM This is fabulous Joyce I love the comparison to knitting..Congrats on the win....Hugs Tim

Maureen Lefanue February 5, 2012 at 4:51 PM Sorry, Joyce, I forgot to say thanks for your kind comments on my poem. I loved your Thread of An Idea - no need for criticism - you did great! Love, Maureen

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM Excellent creativity and poetic quality..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Jack Horne February 5, 2012 at 12:43 PM Beautiful, Joyce. Many congrats on your wins : )

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 4, 2012 at 8:23 PM Poetry weaved by a talented writer! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards February 4, 2012 at 7:22 PM And a true artist of words are you!! It is always a pleasure for our eyes to read your poetry, dear Joyce! Best wishes in the contest!!