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50N sulfuric acid If sprayed on any fabric Instantly turns it to rags Just like some absences Which sweep as a storm N'tatter our souls Bruise our hearts Up to shreds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/15/2013 2:03:00 AM
oh the feeling become so true ,many of my works are on hurt ,push through my dear friend
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Date: 5/16/2012 9:51:00 AM
our hearts like fragile spheres of glass, shaped by or lifes and the past. Like our heart we sometimes shatter taken from us all the things that matter. I love your poem very well written.
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viviane leite
Date: 6/6/2012 9:06:00 PM
Oh, that's so beautiful...thanks Lisa, for reading and writing such pretty lines. :)
Date: 5/15/2012 9:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed what this poem has to tell!
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viviane leite
Date: 6/6/2012 9:06:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.