Thoughts Without Adjectives

Can’t see television because you occlude my vision
People could be compared to a door for that.
Certainly you are not the window type
To keep blocking me the way you do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 2:17 AM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
Spears Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Thank you
Agustin Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Spears Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Thanks
Webster Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 11:19 PM
Made me laugh aloud every time I read it reviewing contest entries. Love it.
Spears Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Your contest was a nice challenge for me. I rarely make time to sit and write and this was a fun contest. Thank you!
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