Thoughts To My Love

When sat here on my own you fill my mind,
Alone with words that can’t begin to say,
The beauty you have shown is mine to find,
Can poetic lines reveal my love today?
Alone with words that can’t begin to say,
My heart, the only thing I give to you,
Can poetic lines reveal my love today?
I pray they carry me into your view.
My heart, the only thing I give to you,
My humble thoughts with no merit or worth,
I pray they carry me into your view,
For in your love I find my own rebirth,
The beauty you have shown is mine to find,
When sat here on my own you fill my mind.




Form: Pantoum Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Oneill Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Fantastic Jemmy.Another classic,though a bit sad and hard on yourself.
Farmer Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Jack, sad kinda suits the blues I think.
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