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Thoughts Tip Toe

Still connected I feel you How can the one that hurt heal the one that is hurting My saddened journey no longer running My thoughts tip toe Carefully painfully feeling each step So much to share My heart is barren nothing in or out a void full of doubt From the vinegar you gave only the sweets I have saved I neither love nor hate What will become my fate...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2011 10:45:00 AM

Oh! thanks Sharon ,, for the comment,, i was just playing around,,, and i'm glad you did not think i'm heartless... or mean.. just silly... I also love the deepness of the tippy toe poem here.. sweet and thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2011 8:10:00 AM

Sharon, a deep poem here that you have penned. I like all those things CArolyn was telling you below here. Also, if and when the "hurter" feels remorse, it can be sweet to begin again!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2011 11:57:00 AM

"From the vinegar you gave, only the sweets I have saved" What an incredible line, Sharon. When someone leaves us behind, there is usually a lot of animosity at first, but it seems you have reached the point where you are just coming to terms with this loss. Eventually we reach a point where there is neither love nor hate in our hearts, but it's hard to open up to a new relationship. Tremendous emotion pours from this poem. Excellent work. Special meaning for me, so it's a fave. Love, CD