Thoughts On Rain

THOUGHTS ON RAIN petals unfurl fresh delicate buds as dawn yawns a promise at sunrise innocent blooms lift heads skywards naïve to gathering clouds dark guise tenderly first raindrops mislead gently sprinkling softly trickling flowers drink in fresh wet beads dry soil turrets gather rippling out of the blue torrential showers beat down hard on fragile heads bowed to ground by waters weight delicate blooms made weak instead clouds disperse as sunrays immerse buds slowly lift humbled and frail heat wavers in mopping moist soil as blooms open up their exquisite detail life’s storms will batter our frames as God lovingly strengthens within earthly tempests threatening squall we grow in Faith and free from sin © Kim van Breda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Fantastic imagery and very smooth flow. Beautiful picture painted of flowers during and after a mild shower. A7...
Van Breda Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Thanks again Robert for your visit to my poems and your encouraging comments. Yeah... I love the rain... when it is gentle.. not too partial to storms though :) ~~X~~
Almonte Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Very beautiful! I love your use of imagery.
Van Breda Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Thank you for your comment and visit Eve. Yes.. I was trying to focus on creating imagery mostly with this poem ~~X~~
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