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Until old age imposes itself upon us, we view ourselves as young of spirit and heart. And yet, time forces us to move on past the boundaries of memory; and confront reality in its starkness. Time is neither here nor there, and yet, it remains a constant. And weaves itself into all our actions or inactions; grinding us down with equal determination, it leaves only broken versions of what used to be in its inexorable passing. The magic of faith and the miracle of birth, remind us that we are mortal by design, for only death can release a soul created to ascend. We're born enthusiastic; splendiferous shooting stars fueled by promises and possibilities. And yet, we eventually fizzle out to an undramatic finish, oblivious to the trail of sparks left in our wake. And we strut upon life's stage with but one desire; to entertain thoughts of wonder. (Free Verse) 02/01/2020

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Date: 3/14/2022 9:29:00 PM
Brilliant write my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Len, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/14/2022 7:21:00 PM
"We're born enthusiastic spectators" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your continued support, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/2/2020 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile.
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Date: 2/3/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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