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Thoughts of Whimsy

A thousand simple things make me smile... The sleeping form of a precious newborn, A child's drawing in his own artistic style, Pastel shades of the sky in the early morn, Fairytales written about a magical unicorn. I am amused by hair with corkscrew curls on heads of adorable little, giggling girls. By puppies tripping over their own feet, Watching moonlight's glow as night unfurls, And a surprise kiss that's incredibly sweet. Someone falling should never make me laugh, But quickly, I'm chuckling out of control Then sincerely apologize for my social gaffe. I wildly cheer when my team scores a goal. I've heard that 'Laughter is good for the soul.' In a spontaneous moment of outdoor fun, I've jumped into a deep snowdrift at full run, I find great pleasure in setting myself free to share the taste of cotton candy, finespun... Life is sweet when I make no excuse for being me **********
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Pachecho Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:12 PM
Lin, fun poem. I dislike the clowns and the merry-go-rounds, but I'll quickly jump on the Ferris wheel apropos to the current landscape here.
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:35 PM
I’ve never found clowns funny. They try too hard to entertain but fall far short. Thanks for commenting.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:45 PM
You have dived headfirst into all those fun quirks that make us what we are, and life what it is Lin, I enjoyed the exuberance that exudes right throughout each line, with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme, top poem! Cheers David
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Thank you. When I gave some thought to what makes me smile or laugh, these seemed to write themselves. lol. It was fun to list them, and as I love to do… in rhyme.
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Great read!
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Thanks so much for commenting, AA.
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 1:25 PM
It's nice to see the simpler things in life in all their beauty. And the beauty in this wonderful world is all around us, we just have to open our eyes to it Tom
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:04 PM
That’s the trouble, Tom. People look for too much negativity. Must be a flaw in their attitude ;-)
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 1:21 PM
Love this one Lin, I'm there for the spontaneous joy :)
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Thanks, LG. That’s the best kind of joy!
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