Thoughts of Two Poets

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                 Our thoughts
                     tumbled
               while we kissed
                      lisping

                  "i love you"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 5:39 PM
wow I do so luv this piece James.. did u write this with another poet? it is so charming and enchanting with it's invitation of luv..
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April 3, 2011 at 5:31 PM
" lisping" is an unexpected word and atreat. i like it and the way you employed that. Thanks as alway, Gerard
Babcock Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Smiling , yes. Love the romantic thoughts on this write. love phyl
Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Hi, James, I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate both your comments and your caring. I think highly of you and your work. Thank you, Gerard.
Neels Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Hey there James, just dropping in to see how you are doing ;) love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 7:10 AM
Thanks for your comments, James. They always mean a lot coming from you. Please be sure to let me know when you post new work! I'm waiting... Love, Carolyn
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March 4, 2011 at 12:38 PM
So glad to see your poem on the hot 100 list, James! Love you, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Happy Weekend James with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 3:51 PM
James u could write a romantic play with these elegant words my friend... lovely visuals so engaging in this piece .. thankxx for your sweet comments always welcome my friend with luv..
Neels Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Thanks for the smiles with this gem James ;-) so much tenderness.. Love Wilma
Austin Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:13 AM
I can't find a poem I haven't read, so I'll just say - you had a pet iguana? Damn if that doesn't fit your sense of humor. This is Disney stuff. Can't you just see that iguana lisping "I love you." Please don't get pissed. I'm sure you loved your iguana. Actually, a person could love any animal that might somehow get into the house. I know I could. Love, daver
K. Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:09 AM
more smiles upon reading this sweet write ;) ^_^
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March 2, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Would two poets make it?...Enjoyed the romantic and passionate work..Sara
Austin Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Is this a tumble in the hay, Sir James? Very tender. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Love the idea of those tumbling thoughts, James. Very cool!
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:50 PM
You gave me a smile tonight, James. Thanks so much! I will write to you when I get home. Love you, Carolyn
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