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Thoughts of the Day

Time, chime The rigors of life climb their rhyme Run, spun No exit, boundless edge embraced, stunned Hide or fight Sweet rumor in plight Brave or timid Our time is limit... life is limit...

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Poet Tacito

Date: 4/29/2013 1:27:00 PM

Time: always against us, if we allow it to not be our friend. A very thought-provoking piece!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2013 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Drake, pleasure to have a comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/28/2013 8:19:00 AM

Hi Yanny, I hope you had a lovely day.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/28/2013 6:39:00 PM

Hello Rick, wishing you a lovely day as well :D hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2013 5:21:00 PM

so many ways our mind can turn during a day and each day adds up to life. cute rhymes, Yanny.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/28/2013 6:38:00 PM

Thanks Andrea a bit stuck in my muse :p but that day the two last lines just popped up while I'm having a lesson with my student, and I got inspired by them:) wishing you a wonderful day Andrea, hug, yanny