Thoughts of the Day

Time, chime
The rigors of life climb their rhyme

Run, spun
No exit, boundless edge embraced, stunned

Hide or fight
Sweet rumor in plight

Brave or timid
Our time is limit... life is limit...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Time: always against us, if we allow it to not be our friend. A very thought-provoking piece!
Widjanarko Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Drake, pleasure to have a comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Hi Yanny, I hope you had a lovely day.
Widjanarko Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 6:39 PM
Hello Rick, wishing you a lovely day as well :D hug, yanny
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 5:21 PM
so many ways our mind can turn during a day and each day adds up to life. cute rhymes, Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Thanks Andrea a bit stuck in my muse :p but that day the two last lines just popped up while I'm having a lesson with my student, and I got inspired by them:) wishing you a wonderful day Andrea, hug, yanny
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 5:11 AM
Great play on words..Enjoyed experiencing your work this morn..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
Widjanarko Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Sara yours are always wonderful :) hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Good morning to you and sleepy time for me.
Widjanarko Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Now is time for me to say good morning to you and sleepy time for me :D
Lamoureux Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Your talent is not limited! Have a great day Yanny.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 8:39 AM
As do yours me! Have a great day.
Widjanarko Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Rick! :D your words encourage me a lot :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:00 AM
- Thoughts about life, Yanny .... well done, enjoy your thoughts! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Thank you sweet Anne :)pleasure to have your visit today wishing you a lovely day :) hug, yanny
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