Thoughts of Myself - Section 1

Ayo, Once upon a time...
Their was a young brave renegade
That would love someone solely than detonate
Than pick up the pieces and try to renovate
Just so he can runaway, and escape just to celebrate
He'd instigate and penetrate in almost anyway
He had no friends, cause they'd die, and souls would levitate
Always showed more love than hate, because he was his own medicaid
Only musically meditated, not truly educated but solely dedicated
To leave this world devastated, and "awe" within his presence
Cause I'll verbally murder peasants and it's not so pleasant
When this is their death sentence, Leaving them jealous
When they go to hell, and I'm attending the heavens
But the thoughts of you snap me right back
To the love and adolescence trapped behind a time gap
It's like I took a nap to relax and pass these lonely facts
But I got passed it, and regained my own passion
Passing by my own patronized actions
Probably now just pacifying and laughing trying to imagine
Why I was so maddened, I'm like a wolf blowing down pigs cabins
I'm the captain shooting lyrical cannons trying to capture the captive
The caption to the story is "Aladdin's reconnection with his Jasmine"
But it's forever lost, cause life it's not magic
It's just a tragic damaged planet filled with only havoc
Happiness is riddled upon his own sadness

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Townsend Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Your narrative...Wow! Just the flow of words fit together so naturally. Hypnotic and satisfying!
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December 31, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Ty Townsend, Hopefully more and more of these poems very soon!
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December 25, 2014 at 9:23 PM
WOW, Love the bio, WOW Billy , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 31, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Linda! A very much appreciated warm welcome, I've been loving the feedback always so positive and respectful, I'll always be inspired to write a new poem, and have yourself a great new year also! :)
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December 24, 2014 at 4:02 AM
Fire! Dude your style is nice!
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December 31, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thank you man!
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December 23, 2014 at 7:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup,Trent !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 23, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome to P - Soup, Anne - Lise, This shall be an interesting and fun new community to be apart of! :) And have a wonderful holidays to you too!
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