Virginia Gelok Poet Free verse

Thoughts of My Dad

My Dad would tell me that there would me many men in my life. Be sure who I want in my life.
The one man I want in my life is YOU Dad. Remembering our lives together make me want more. 
Only in my dreams and in my heart am I able to be with you now.
You left me suddenly and the only address I have for you is "HEAVEN" !
I pray that one day I will be by your side once again.
I love you Dad...see you in my dreams !

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Bj Legros Kelley June 22, 2021 at 9:42 PM This is so heartfelt, loving and deeply sweet. I miss my dad as well. I have had dreams of him, but never enough. I can totally relate to this poem Virginia. <3 Virginia Gelok June 23, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thankyou so much. Seems to me our parents mean so much more when we don't have near them any longer.

Victor Buhagiar June 21, 2021 at 2:21 AM It is right to give fathers their dues, though I admit, being a male, my mother always came first. Virginia Gelok June 21, 2021 at 11:51 AM This tells me you had a great mom...I hope my boys feel this way about me, since they only had me. My dad was the one who wanted the most for me and encouraged me. My mom ,on the other hand, seemed to just need us to do her work. My husband felt like you to his mom and it shows...he's a wonderful man. I bet you are too.

Rama Balasubramanian June 20, 2021 at 11:03 AM Good one! My dad is no more and what you wrote I agree. I think of my father same way. Great tribute to your dad Virginia Gelok June 20, 2021 at 6:03 PM Thankyou for your comment. I know there are many of us who would love to have thier Dad back here even if he was telling us what to do and when to do it.. Dad was a good man and only wanted the the best for me and my siblings. I'm honoured to be his daughter.