Thoughts --Infinitian

some times when on your own thoughts and
hurt reigns, hopes pushed to one side.
a dark place shows its head
do you know why it 
or how it does?
we all have
ebbs and
downs




Penned 11 October 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 4:19 PM
this is deep Seren - love the link with shadows to the ups and downs in our lives - step out of the shadows and in to the light:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 4:28 PM
I've struggled with ittoo - to get a good flow with one syllable words and an acrostic is a challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Jan Omg it wasn't easy for me. Thanks to Ian I didn't enter an incorrect one.....Seren.
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