Thoughts in Fog

My thoughts are hard to hold when 
I know they're hard to shape.
Like climbing out of fog
just to fall into more.
I try to dream,
but worry gets there first—
a shadow curled up in my brain,
wide awake at night.
Even sleep feels heavy.
Even silence buzzes.
Even breathing sometimes
feels like work.
Life, in general,
just won’t let go.
It presses in—
quiet,
loud,
never still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Hello Lady Dra, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Your not the only one with thoughts in a fog. When thoughts are in a fog , we can not think clearly. Enjoy your day and keep on creating poetry. Enjoy your day lady dRA.
Agustin Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 12:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Faure Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Enjoy very well!
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