Thoughts In a Warm Room

She looked deep into his eyes
wondering why she loved him
It was not shape or personality alone
His tongue was sharp at times
and as he touched her magic parts
Wondering -- vanished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 6, 2008 at 8:39 AM
Wow....this one is hot with passion!!! Good Job Tony! ~ Carrie
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