Thoughts, Gazing Unpredictably Inward at Snow

As I gaze upward at the sky so blue,  
I hope you’re resting well,  
So that you can feel renewed.  

The orange sky presents an extraordinary hue  
When the snow blankets the mountainside,  
And I wish for that mountain to rest peacefully.  

You have an incredibly open heart,  
A fine citizen and a romantic hero,  
As the snow sparkles among the trees, it creates a work of art.  

Snowballs are hurled from my dreams,  
Quickly landing in the heart of nature and wildlife  
In this unpredictable world.  

Free-flying thoughts take their flight  
From your creative mind,  
Venturing into the beauty of nature and the comfort of the fireside.  

Use your hands and eyes to solve problems;  
Your talent has often been on display,  
Imbuing various shades of color  
To convey such meaningful news.  
Naturally, I think of you  
And all that you do,  
High up on the mountainside where you tread so skillfully.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:02 PM
This is deep, Laura. I love Nature-and the way the snow makes you think inward. Maybe you are ~melting~ - very lovely
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October 21, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Thank you very much! I'm happy you read my poem!
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