Thoughts Blur

I struggle with what happens 
To all the thoughts in my brain 
Quickly moving becoming a blur 
Just one I want to see one plain

Instead they bounce all around 
Like marbles dropped on the floor 
If they would slow down for me 
I’d understand myself a little more 

They won’t slow down even once 
So I can get a good look at them
I’m confused by my own thoughts 
They always make my head swim

If you can fathom what I’m saying 
I’m not worried not many really do 
But those who do or may share it
They know what I’m going through
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