Thoughts Blur
I struggle with what happens
To all the thoughts in my brain
Quickly moving becoming a blur
Just one I want to see one plain
Instead they bounce all around
Like marbles dropped on the floor
If they would slow down for me
I’d understand myself a little more
They won’t slow down even once
So I can get a good look at them
I’m confused by my own thoughts
They always make my head swim
If you can fathom what I’m saying
I’m not worried not many really do
But those who do or may share it
They know what I’m going through
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