Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Thoughts At Night

The sun travels down and disappears for the night...
                                           The moon spreads it's wings with a
                                                       cascading height...
                                   Into the darkness my thoughts find their way...
                                       I can then scribble endlessly like letters
                                                           in a parade...
                                   I struggle to finish before the sun finds my sky...
                               And as the light pours down, my thoughts can't hide...

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2012 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on your super win Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2012 at 10:38 AM congrats Michael luv on a fabulous win for these more than fabulous words.. JG in mesmerized mode from u .. oh.. xoxox..

M.I.A . March 4, 2012 at 12:45 AM ...the sun finds my sky... would love to see your sky, Michael. day and night... beautiful poem

Charmaine Chircop February 27, 2012 at 10:04 AM Beautiful... Charma

Wilma Neels February 26, 2012 at 8:32 AM I wish I had these thoughts when I have my bouts of sleepless nights Michael, glad to see you posting so many this week ;) love wilma

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 25, 2012 at 10:28 AM nice words put down in a little piece that reminds me of when i write in the dark. I too, sleep with a moleskiine pad. I thought I was the only one! Looks like I need to read more of your stuff...again:)

Dinda Minardi February 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM Loved every line, Michael. Have a great weekend :)

Deck Fitzgerald February 25, 2012 at 5:01 AM I enjoyed this visit today nice write Michael , Declan ....

Deb Wilson February 24, 2012 at 11:24 PM just a beautiful description of your creative flow ~~love,Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 24, 2012 at 8:22 PM u had me at those first two lines Michael luv.. whisked away by fascinating words to infatuate the heart .. so vividly visual and such a delight to enjoy .. have a super weekend .. JG in relaxed mode now that football season is over.. oh.. xoxo..Yankess away..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair February 24, 2012 at 5:31 PM Glad that the night gave you this nice write..jag

Russell Sivey February 24, 2012 at 3:56 PM This is a truly beautiful, simply beautiful write! I just love the flow of your poem, so smooth! I think your, "Into the darkness my thoughts find their way..." is a great line, stating so much, especially pertaining to the title "Thoughts at Night"! I really enjoyed your poem this fine evening Michael! I love your write! Great Work!