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Thoughts Around My Brolly

My mom has given me a brolly For it has started forth to rain. My mom has given it - so jolly, With its polka dots, (not plain). She stood me on a little seat And I'm looking at the sky... A rainbow's there in front of me. It's sun/rain by and by. I'm hoping sun will shine alone Without this rain to beat. It would lend more of a happy tone... Still, at least the day's not sleet! 9/19/2017

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Date: 10/7/2017 12:41:00 AM
Laura - Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 10/6/2017 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura , you captured the child feelings , thank you … Hugs Eve ~`*
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