Thoughts Are Typed

A picture of you 
I see this in front of me 
A book i must read 
All i can do is follow your lead
A planted seed in my being
What is it i am seeing

Words are spoken 
Thoughts are typed
Questions are dared
There is no holding back 
Delving into the unknown

Await now waits 
Is this my fate 
There is no logic
But a pull between us 
Deep than once thought to be 
As now we want the words 

First a fall of the minds
Now our thoughts are turning
In our empty spaces we live 
In conversation a voice is heard
Torn into two 
Wanting to be one 
What now has begun ....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Al-Riyami Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 9:12 AM
"Torn into two.Wanting to be one.What now has begun..." That ending was Brill:) I am well interested what this is all behind,inspirational or experience?or maybe both(Its always normally both) Let me know@,@
Fraser Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:40 AM
It's like an inner self, or even the other half creating ideas to write about, and they are written. Once they are finished, the two become one again. If you want to correspond with any of the poets on this site, click on the small soup bowl, that's your link to internal email. Go to your "My Soup Mail" link at the top left hand side >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Torn into two wanting to be one .. nice expression I enjoyed it
A   Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:53 PM
truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
Hales Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Joseph ,it means alot when others like reading your work... sarah x
Spence Sr Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:43 PM
This is just so wonderfully expressive poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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