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Thoughts Are Typed

A picture of you I see this in front of me A book i must read All i can do is follow your lead A planted seed in my being What is it i am seeing Words are spoken Thoughts are typed Questions are dared There is no holding back Delving into the unknown Await now waits Is this my fate There is no logic But a pull between us Deep than once thought to be As now we want the words First a fall of the minds Now our thoughts are turning In our empty spaces we live In conversation a voice is heard Torn into two Wanting to be one What now has begun ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/30/2010 9:12:00 AM
"Torn into two.Wanting to be one.What now has begun..." That ending was Brill:) I am well interested what this is all behind,inspirational or experience?or maybe both(Its always normally both) Let me know@,@
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:40:00 AM
It's like an inner self, or even the other half creating ideas to write about, and they are written. Once they are finished, the two become one again. If you want to correspond with any of the poets on this site, click on the small soup bowl, that's your link to internal email. Go to your "My Soup Mail" link at the top left hand side >> James
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:58:00 PM
Torn into two wanting to be one .. nice expression I enjoyed it
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:53:00 PM
truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Joseph ,it means alot when others like reading your work... sarah x
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:43:00 PM
This is just so wonderfully expressive poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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