Thoughts and Words

While listening to someone 
You think about his words.
But words may not compare
With this man's real thoughts.

He may say something pleasant
For you and feeling yours
But have the thought that may be
Not good and even hurts.

He says:"I love you" may be,
He gives you flowers, sweets,
But thinks:"I want to leave you
When suitable chance meets"

For you it is important 
To hear not only words
But watch him doing deals.
This way you'll get his thoughts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 18, 2016 at 11:43 AM
hope to see you back this year. 2016
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June 4, 2015 at 11:39 PM
Yana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Y. Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Hi Yana, I appreciate the message in you poem. Great lines to live by. Nice job! :) Alexis
Y. Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 5:29 PM
I'm just a woman who loves to write. They have tools here on the website that can assist you with using the correct grammar. However you seem to be writing well to me:) Alexis
Uzhinskaya Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Thank you! I am trying to write without grammar mistakes, if I have tell me, please. I am a teacher and you? What are you?
A  Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Yana, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Uzhinskaya Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Skat ! It is very pleasant to read your kind words. I live in a small town now and I am a teacher. I am 27. And I like writing poems a lot. Even in my childhood I wrote smth. And you?
Romaine Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Hey Yana, stopped by for a visit. Such wisdom spoken in this wonderful poem of yours. Advice we would all do well to follow. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
Uzhinskaya Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Thank you very much, Neva! It is very kind of you! I will try to do my best! I am a teacher and I live in a small town and I like writing a lot, what about you?
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