Thoughts and Dreams

Thoughts of
you invade my
mind, all throughout
the day

Dreaming of
us spending
time in every
different way

Wondering if
you think of
me, as I think
of you

Torn amid
your seeming
beauty and the
graceful things
you do

You overwhelm
me in every way,
in ways I can’t
describe

My feelings
swirl and merge
together, difficult
to divide

Thoughts and
dreams of you
my dear are copious
in my mind

Which gives
the gift of loving
you, and seeing
you all the time


Written in Arizona -Circa May 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ledbetter Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 10:22 PM
You're very good, Marquis. And, you're right about what you said in one of your other poems; it's a gift by inspiration. My daughter got me interested in poetry, and when I began to write, most times, it flowed from my mind almost faster than I could write it down. The lines came so fast, I was afraid I would lose the thought.
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Hey thanks Lionel, I really appreciate that! Oh yeah inspiration is so huge in our thing. I've had poems like that as well...so awesome when that happens. I call that "A poem writing itself". It feels like the poem is doing all the writing for you, Great Feeling! Thanks! MC
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:37 AM
An admirable heartfelt dream
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Thanks for that rick! This is actually a newer one, written in Spring 2010.
Gabriella Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 8:41 PM
I really love this. A wonderful poem of love! Great work. :)
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Thank you April, that means a lot coming from a wonderful poet such as yourself! Much appreciated! MC
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