Thoughts and Dreams

Thoughts of you invade my mind, all throughout the day Dreaming of us spending time in every different way Wondering if you think of me, as I think of you Torn amid your seeming beauty and the graceful things you do You overwhelm me in every way, in ways I can’t describe My feelings swirl and merge together, difficult to divide Thoughts and dreams of you my dear are copious in my mind Which gives the gift of loving you, and seeing you all the time Written in Arizona -Circa May 2010

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Lionel Ledbetter

Date: 11/2/2013 10:22:00 PM

You're very good, Marquis. And, you're right about what you said in one of your other poems; it's a gift by inspiration. My daughter got me interested in poetry, and when I began to write, most times, it flowed from my mind almost faster than I could write it down. The lines came so fast, I was afraid I would lose the thought.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 11/3/2013 12:41:00 PM

Hey thanks Lionel, I really appreciate that! Oh yeah inspiration is so huge in our thing. I've had poems like that as well...so awesome when that happens. I call that "A poem writing itself". It feels like the poem is doing all the writing for you, Great Feeling! Thanks! MC

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2013 6:37:00 AM

An admirable heartfelt dream

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 3:52:00 PM

Thanks for that rick! This is actually a newer one, written in Spring 2010.

April Gabriella

Date: 7/19/2013 8:41:00 PM

I really love this. A wonderful poem of love! Great work. :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/20/2013 9:20:00 AM

Thank you April, that means a lot coming from a wonderful poet such as yourself! Much appreciated! MC