Thoughts

September 23, 2005 - Friday 

 thoughts 


Thoughts of you crawling around inside my head, they just will not go away. Did it 
make you feel better to imagine you were in full control of me,  you came as a 
thief in the night, before you had instilled the belief you were a shelter from the 
storm but within the calm was nothing more than rage with no end, violation of 
the trust which never came easy to begin with, complete anahilationof the person 
i knew to be me, because i thought as my friend you could never do me any 
harm, but the skies darkened, in a different light the truth behind your charm was 
revealed, the mind of a disturbed individual no longer concealed.
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