Beverly Faustinelli Poet Free verse

Thoughts

 I wish I knew what these thoughts were.
 What they mean
 What they are
 What they want
 I can't seem to understand.
 I feel llike I'm drowning 
 I can't seem to stay afloat 
 I'm struggling 
 Overwhelmed 
 Darkness sorrounds me
 Eats me alive
 On my mind, I have so many thoughts 
 Thoughts that seem to have a mind of their own
 To hurt me
 To punish me
 To burn me
 Thoughts. Thoughts. Thoughts.
 So much on my mind, yet
 So lost, confused, and empty.

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Beata Agustin December 30, 2024 at 3:24 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A March 19, 2016 at 12:12 AM well expressed, Beverly. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2016 at 9:14 PM Deep write, Beverly, in a way I've been through the struggle myself. Enjoyed the way you express your thoughts. LINDA