Ralph Sergi Poet Prose

Thoughts

The Mask it cannot hide
those feelings deep inside
that squeeze the senses tight
to try and recall a
time of love,lust and sin
then you realize now
thoughts are all you have left

Ralph Sergi   Masquerade
Contest April 25, 2014

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Ana Espinola Collins May 14, 2014 at 5:55 PM Short but powerful! Great write Ralph :)Ana

Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2014 at 11:48 AM Ralph, wow, I like this! this is how I feel right now. All I have left are my thoughts. Where has it all gone, why this heavy mask?? enjoyed , Congrats on your poem :) Linda Ralph Sergi May 6, 2014 at 1:07 PM Thanks, Linda: But I was just warned that I have to have one title beginning with a T. I did correct it. I was using her photo of the masks as a theme.

Nette Onclaud May 1, 2014 at 5:30 AM andrea is right, sergi.. i gave this a slot because of content and flow.. kindly change the title to one word, starting with the letter T.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs! Ralph Sergi May 6, 2014 at 1:00 PM Thanks foe the correction, nette. I did correct it. An Italian hug!

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2014 at 6:33 PM ;this is nice, but do you know the rules of this form? You have to make one title and then all the first words of your acrostic going down have to begin with that letter. Go check out her example! Ralph Sergi May 6, 2014 at 1:02 PM Hi Andrea: Thank you for the correction. I did correct it. An Italian hug!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 26, 2014 at 7:10 AM Well crafted and well penned poem, Ralph Ralph Sergi April 28, 2014 at 8:20 AM Thank you , Dr. Ram. This is first attempt using the pleiades form.

Ivor Kos April 26, 2014 at 12:22 AM I really enjoyed this. Fav'd!