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Thoughts

The Mask it cannot hide
those feelings deep inside
that squeeze the senses tight
to try and recall a
time of love,lust and sin
then you realize now
thoughts are all you have left

Ralph Sergi   Masquerade
Contest April 25, 2014

Copyright © Ralph Sergi | Year Posted 2014

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Ana Espinola Collins Date: 5/14/2014 5:55:00 PM Short but powerful! Great write Ralph :)Ana Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/6/2014 11:48:00 AM Ralph, wow, I like this! this is how I feel right now. All I have left are my thoughts. Where has it all gone, why this heavy mask?? enjoyed , Congrats on your poem :) Linda Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/6/2014 1:07:00 PM Thanks, Linda: But I was just warned that I have to have one title beginning with a T. I did correct it. I was using her photo of the masks as a theme.

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/1/2014 5:30:00 AM andrea is right, sergi.. i gave this a slot because of content and flow.. kindly change the title to one word, starting with the letter T.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs! Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/6/2014 1:00:00 PM Thanks foe the correction, nette. I did correct it. An Italian hug!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2014 6:33:00 PM ;this is nice, but do you know the rules of this form? You have to make one title and then all the first words of your acrostic going down have to begin with that letter. Go check out her example! Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/6/2014 1:02:00 PM Hi Andrea: Thank you for the correction. I did correct it. An Italian hug!

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/26/2014 7:10:00 AM Well crafted and well penned poem, Ralph Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 4/28/2014 8:20:00 AM Thank you , Dr. Ram. This is first attempt using the pleiades form.

Ivor Kos Date: 4/26/2014 12:22:00 AM I really enjoyed this. Fav'd! Login to Reply